Alice and Rabbit in Eden
Alice runs into Mr. Rabbit and they suddenly fall into a new world. They see they're in the Garden of Eden. They discover their true calling and fight for survival. The world is in their hands.
Finding Beowulf
Alice, Mr. Rabbit, Adam, and Eve run into Beowulf. Beowulf has lost his kingdom due to a dragon that has taken everything from him. Alice, Mr. Rabbit. Adam, and Eve help Beowulf by delivering a gift from God that will help him defeat the dragon so he can lead God's armies. They plan to strike at dawn.
Battle Inferno
Alice, Mr. Rabbit, Adam, Eve, and Beowulf find the dragon, but find out things aren't what they seem. The enemy has been waiting. Beowulf must look within himself to find courage to fight for his friends. It's either win, or die trying.
The Deep Silence Before the Plunge
The whole crew is shown another world after defeating the dragon. However this time, the real Devil shows himself. The fight comes to our heroes Beowulf, Adam, Eve, Alice, and Mr. Rabbit in a castle that offers no escape. Let the greatest battle of time commence.
The End
Satan's army of Thirty million crashes into the castle. It is overrun, and hope looks bleak. The heroes must fight with all their might and pray for a miracle.
Great portfolio guide! It made me actually want to read your story! I like how you have all of your paragraphs and dialogue spaces out. It was very easy to read. I also loved how you combined two very different stories into one. Your dialogue was great too. I was able to connect to the story and really understand what was going on and what everyone was thinking. It makes the story more interesting. Honestly there isn't much here that I would change. You did a great job and I look forward to reading more from your blog this semester!
ReplyDeleteHi Ben!
ReplyDeleteIt was a relief clicking on your portfolio and seeing that you have the original layout from the beginning of the class still! I do too and I thought I was the only one. I personally like it because it keeps things easy to read. Sometimes layouts are too much and certain fonts or colors are difficult to read.
I really like your descriptions that you used. They are detailed yet make me want to dig deeper. I also use that little cliff hanger to encourage readers to click the link to see what it is all about.
Your dialogue in your stories are really good. I struggle with writing dialogue, but yours flowed very well and made sense. I could clearly picture your characters talking. I did not see anything that I think needed to be fixed or changed. Overall, really good job! Good luck in the final weeks of this class!